Big city or countryside

19 Apr

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. I disagree with this statement. Growing up in a big city has a lot of benefits than doing so in countryside.

First and foremost, the development. Health care, education, entertainment, transportation; every aspect in general is better in city. Generally, the good schools and colleges are usually located in big cities. People from countryside also end up coming to cities to pursue their higher education. Same with the hospitals and clinics. From diagnosis to treatment, the health service is far better as compared to the countryside. And, not to forget, different parks, museums, libraries, etc. are present for the kids to enjoy.

Secondly, there is technology and it’s advancement. In today’s world, knowledge of technology and it’s advancement has become a must. All the new gadgets and services are generally concentrated in the big cities so children can have knowledge about these from the start. Furthermore, the provisions for extra-curricular activities, like sports, singing, dancing, etc. are more pronounced in cities. Summer and winter camps, training institutions and everything help to sharpen the children’s skills from the very beginning. Ultimately, all of this aids them to secure a bright future.

However, growing in countryside also has its advantages. Peaceful and fresh environment sounds better than the noisy cities. Growing up in an area filled with pure natural beauty indeed proves to be a better option than among huge buildings.

To summarize it, I would say that growing up in big cities is better than growing up in countryside.

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6 Responses to “Big city or countryside”

  1. Sujin April 19, 2012 at 12:06 pm #

    euta post ta gayab vayecha ta!!
    last line ma sano mistake vete ni maile..
    yo IELTS haru ma interesting creative type writing hudaina? yo ta kasto descriptive type matra k.

    • surockshya April 19, 2012 at 5:06 pm #

      tyo euta aafaile delete garidiyeko ni maile…kaha cha ra mistake???etikai mistake vete vandine ;)???sabai essay haru jasto matra hune k hai, ramailo ta hudaina ni…agree or disagree matra hune types sabai, euta point choose garne n tyesko lagi aafule vanne…

      • Sujin April 20, 2012 at 12:20 am #

        yo mistake pani. timro post jastai gayab vayecha.

      • surockshya April 20, 2012 at 7:08 am #

        hehe, invisibility cloak le hide garidiyeko ni!!!

  2. Kaushal Shrestha (@k4kaushal) June 28, 2012 at 8:48 am #

    malai ta esto argumentative essay kya ramailo lagcha! I agree with you. cities are better in this age. countryside is more like a vacation spot.

    • surockshya June 28, 2012 at 10:30 am #

      ya hai, ghumna n all chai ramailo bt basna ta cities nai better ni…

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